Wanderlost "Tongue-Tied" Page 21

Wow. That is a terrific page, and one I could use to *teach* comic appreciation to someone who has no idea how all the different elements work together. A lot of interesting and logical decisions in this one. (Plus I have to love the message!).

I shall phone Monday morning about a reschedule. Please check email for detail. Great work!

Thanks, man. There are a lot of elements in this page: sound effects, stars, dialog, perspective - and all that leading the eye stuff. :-)

As ever, i love it.

Is "dammit" a swear? Are you still aiming for family friendly? Where does it lie?

I'm totally not sure, but it stood out for me as a language anomoly in the strip.

Thanks!

It could be a naughty word. It depends on region, I think. I don't know.

Maybe I'll change it before publication.

Not to keep nagging you about the ankle -- but I think the "snap" sound effect is a bad idea, unless you've changed your mind since we discussed this page and you want the ankle to be actually broken, instead of just twisted. Because "snap" amkes it sound like the ankle, well, snapped.

For just twisted, I think you should either do pain stars or do a sound effect saying "twist." But not "snap."

Other than that, though, this is a nice page. (Why do I always lead with the complaint?)

Hmmm. You might be right. Twist, not snap.

Obviously I added background detail since you saw this page.